Reflection Blog

My writing format for this proposal was pretty similar as how I write most of my papers. With a strong thesis and information to back it up. I used three body paragraphs like the typical five paragraph essay with a conclusion to tie my thesis back. It was pretty difficult to turn this paper into a shark tank proposal. I had to adjust my problem to find out ways to benefit the Johnson Center. Once I found out a solid problem I used my research that I found to back it up so we as a whole can fix the dilemma. My strengths in writing this paper were my ability to provide a strong argument with valid research to help me out. Another one of my strengths would be my ability to provide a strong hook and background information about my problem. I addressed the problems of gaining the freshman 15. This is a big concern for all college students because of the lack of drive to work out for some students and the dorm food did not help my case either. My weakness was probably getting the format down because that has typically always been my problem with writing papers. Another one of my weaknesses would be my transitions from point to point because I usually do not do to well on that either. All in all, I felt like I provided a strong argument with great information to back it up.